Data Observation Paragraph
According to the [ graph/table/chart] we’ve seen [an increase/a rise/an improvement] in [data e.g. population, sales, time]. The [most important/biggest/significant] [change/rise/increase/segment] is [area], which [rose/improved] [amount] [since/over X time period]. Other areas saw a [significant/lesser/similar] change, such as [area], which saw [change] and [area], which [action change].
- Comparing data involves recognising similarities and differences.
- Focus on the data that shows the main similarities/differences.
- Always mention the actual data (numbers, percentages, dates, etc.) in your comparison but make sure it is relevant to the point you are making.